Thursday, November 17, 2005
Thoughts
"Lay to Rest"
Lay to rest, behind these closed eyes
Hanging sun given way to a
Previous day lost by moon light
Struggling evening weakening
With appearing stars giving leave
To a exhausted day grieving
Disappear into my mind
The night and time will supply
Endless dreams to always find.
This reality I'll leave
Ever fading memories
Disappear into my dreams
Clinging to a dreary night
Forget the endless plight
Which I would die to make right
With a brand new day received
A fading moon is reprieved
Until sunset brings evening
A world kissed by morning dew
I will be reborn anew
But it will all end too soon.
Opionin
I really liked how this poem came together and flowed. I took the structural style from Lewis Caroll's book "Through the Looking Glass". I recommend checking out his poem if you haven't. It's at the very end of the story. Hope you like this one.
Recommended Listening
Album: "A Ghost Tropic" By: Songs: Ohia
Song: "The Oceans's Nerve"
"Lay to Rest"
Lay to rest, behind these closed eyes
Hanging sun given way to a
Previous day lost by moon light
Struggling evening weakening
With appearing stars giving leave
To a exhausted day grieving
Disappear into my mind
The night and time will supply
Endless dreams to always find.
This reality I'll leave
Ever fading memories
Disappear into my dreams
Clinging to a dreary night
Forget the endless plight
Which I would die to make right
With a brand new day received
A fading moon is reprieved
Until sunset brings evening
A world kissed by morning dew
I will be reborn anew
But it will all end too soon.
Opionin
I really liked how this poem came together and flowed. I took the structural style from Lewis Caroll's book "Through the Looking Glass". I recommend checking out his poem if you haven't. It's at the very end of the story. Hope you like this one.
Recommended Listening
Album: "A Ghost Tropic" By: Songs: Ohia
Song: "The Oceans's Nerve"
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